第19节
(1/2)《高考英语满分作文》 / 钧墨
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极夜轨迹
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原版(正经的)故事梗概:从前有一个十二岁的学渣名叫史蒂夫,他懒得学习更懒得做作业。尽管他身高很高(外表很显眼的意思),但仍然没人注意他。直到有一天……一个姓白的老师(怀特吧喂!)来到了他的班级。
那一天,史蒂夫感觉自己恋爱了。
……然而恋爱什么的并没有什么卵用,他依然是个怠惰的差生。有一次考试他考得异常之萎,引起了白老师(怀特老师啊喂!)的不满,于是白老师(这个梗你还要用几次啊!_(:з)∠)_)找他喝茶。不管怎么好说歹说都没有戳中史蒂夫的□□,但当她无意中说出自己很在乎史蒂夫的时候,史蒂夫的基佬之魂觉醒了(什么奇怪的东西混了进来!)。他决定洗心革面重新做人。毕竟他可是世界徒手碎大石的大佬啊,小僵尸小蜘蛛小白纷纷拜倒在他的短裤下,随便追求个初中女老师什么的根本不在话下。
------接下来是读后续写段落
日常性转故事梗概:
从前有一个差生她名叫星野,她沉迷游戏不能自拔,懒得学习更懒得做作业。日复一日地怠惰,尽管她外表不错但仍然很不起眼,没人关注她。直到有一天……选考成绩来到了她的班级。跟预料中一样,她用笔和试卷完成了一次核爆。当晚她想不开想要离开这个世界,这个没有人在乎她没有未来可言的世界。
这样想着,她进入了梦乡。
……
------接下来是作者脑洞时间
史蒂夫-星野 e-白默
极夜轨迹
一阵风从敞开着的窗户里吹进来,顺便拂过坐在后排窗边的星野的额发。散落下来,盖住一半眼睛的过长刘海被微微撩起,露出了她因过度疲劳而缺乏神采的双眼。
星野用手背抹了抹眼眶下的青黑,继续低下头作出认真听课的模样。
绵密的白云在仅能获得的一方视野中慢慢移动,渐渐遮住了阳光。
星野坐在教室的左后方,远离门靠窗的一边。正如位置暗示的那样,她是个不起眼的吊车尾学生,虽然成绩不佳,但好在行为安分,为人沉默,并不引起老师注意。
也正因如此,她的内心渐渐被惰性和孤独侵蚀,隐藏在一贯软弱内向的外表下的变化,连最亲近的父母都未曾觉察。
就这样,从高一开始,星野的成绩逐年下滑。
外人看到的是她貌似不变的努力,只有她知道,原本回家后认真看书的时间越来越少,取而代之的是以查资料为由,整夜整夜地玩